journals for assesment
1. What changes have you made?
The changes that i have made is the whole poem, from good to bad.
2. Why? What does it tell us about changes in Australia?
The reason for this is because our world has changed dramatically since 1960 to 2008, their is alot more pollution now because the accesive amount of transportation.
3. What techniques have you used to reveal these changes (metaphors, simile, personification, onomatopoeia)
The techniques that i have used is by me emphasising what i am talking about, i was trying to get the veiwers to understand on how the wya our world had changed from a good world to a very unhealthy world.
4. If you used a technique, why did you choose it? How is it effective in creating meaning
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